1. First paragraph is the introduction with details of who, where, what and why and with a hook.
2. Add relevant and interesting detail to each paragraph by using my senses.
3. Use interesting vocabulary that creates a clearer picture for the reader.
'Cheers Big Ears!' I said aloud, grinning from ear to ear.
Today at school Max brought me a smoothie that he made with Mrs Cacace. He was learning to follow instructions to make a healthy smoothie and he brought me a glass. What an awesome surprise!
As soon as I saw it, I knew that one of the ingredients must be the super vege ' SPINACH' BECAUSE IT WAS A LIME GREEN.....and it looked the same colour as my smoothies I make every morning.
When I was a kid, there was a TV cartoon character called Popeye the Sailorman who would down a tin of spinach whenever he needed strength to fight off the baddies. Who'd figure that years later I would be downing spinach too, except there are other ingredients with it like banana and kiwifruit.
Wel,l I was supposed to have it for lunch but then Mrs Tamati an ex-teacher at Parkvale came in to see me and the class, and I forgot about my smoothie sitting in the teacher station.
So it was again a nice surprise when after school, I peered ito my teacher station and saw that super smoothie sitting there just waiting to be swallowed. Kathy our cleaner was in the classroom at this stage so I asked her to take a photo of me just before I drank it.
Yuuummmm! Cheers Max, I enjoyed that.